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"Y'may 'ave sung wi' the women before, lad, but until y've bloodied y'r spear, y'r not a man," Damon spoke lightly, nudging the young Prince. His blue eyes twinkled, his red-gold curls catching the morning light. They were all eager and nervous in equal parts, even the battle tried like Damon and Eamonn, excitable as they readied to ride with their fathers for the first time into battle.
"Hah! 'E's a bit precious f'r that, yet," laughed Oisin as he made his saddle sure. The younger boys looked to each other in confusion as the elder burst into racuous laughter.
"Aye, 'e'll need a sight maer meat on them bones afore THAT kind o' sparring, I'd say!" Damon tossed his head, looking to his younger brother. "Eh, Ildr?"
Twelve to Damon's vastly ancient thirteen, the slim youth's pale eyes took in the young prince with amusement. "Aye, but he cannae 'ave OUR little mistress anyhow, eh?" This, with a flash of white teeth.
"Oh, do not REMIND me. Viviene asked me to bring her a FINGER. Of all the trophies for a little girl to want..." Prince Gareth rolled his eyes, then assured himself of his tokens one last time. While the Twelve were all strong and bold lads, tall and broad as the folk of Bryoni tended to be, eleven year old Gareth was girl slim and had the pretty features of his Mistland mother. While several of the lads were golden haired, HE had hair as glistening pale as thistledown that floated about his fine featured face, and there wasn't anyone with eyes quite like his. Fairy-eyes, they said, all night sky violets. But his hands were as rough as any, for he had learned the ways of sword and bow, spear and javelin, along with the rest.
"A finger? HAH!" Comcha, as broad a boy as ever you saw of twelve, grinned widely. "Y'hear that, Art? Our wee little Princess wants herself a FINGER!" His mirror in all but intellect, golden haired Art, loyal as a hound and dull as an ox, laughed.
"We'll 'ave for ourselves quite a bride, eh?"
"I would prefer you not humor my sister in that." Prince Gareth laughed. Little Viviene was the darling of his friends, as dark as his fairy mother, fierce as a tiny hawk. At the grand age of six, she already fancied herself every bit as bold as the 'men' of her brother's company, hand-picked to be his companions on the hunt and in battle. She had not quite known what suitor meant, when she began to call the lads such a thing, fancying by the handmaids' tales that it had something to do with knights and all that nonesense, but when they'd the right of it, she had grinned like a coquette and the lads had come to joke that she was their wee little Lady and bring her tokens.
Some took their play duty a little more seriously than others, and Art was the worst for that crime. Mind, he did not quite imagine that young Viviene would really be so pleased to be presented with a Northman's finger, but he would prefer to not find out.
This earned all the more laughter. "Not squeamish, are ye, lad? They done said y'seen th' dead a'fore, waer it but exaggeratin? Or afeared t' see 'em wi'out y' Maman thair?" Oisin joked, brushing back his hair, as red as his horse's coat. There were a few calls of, "Oh! Mama, Mummie, MAMAN!" in jest from the others, even golden-haired Eamonn, his dearest friend.
But so were lads, and Gareth didn't trouble to answer, instead stooping to take up the dust of the field, take it betwinx his fingers, and let it float off on the faint breeze. His other hand played out the shapes of the old call to blessing. Earth below, Sea surround, Sky above, ye three who make us Bryoni, watch over these, said the signs. Signs his Maman taught him as a wee little thing. Though she was a Mistlander, dark and tiny, she was Bryoni; the Earth had accepted her pledge, the Air had caught her promises, and the Sea had listened to her songs again and again. He knew none of these had been there, when he and Maman had stood to defend Gwyfar, his Maman with little Viviene growing inside her, he barely four, the bold women of the Circle telling her to run while SHE told him that they were Bryoni and he was Papa's pride, to help her wake the land to protect what Papa had been tricked away from.
They could laugh because that little lad of four had sung the songs of power with the tiny Queen, and between them they had waked the stones to crush and the seas to boil, and oh! Hadn't the bodies been like little toys? It would have been funny, if Maman had not taken him down after she had woken from her swoon to show him these men with their swirling tattoos and hair wound with bone and iron ornament were still men.
"Never fear, mon petit," Maman had told him, "to take a life. Yet never take them lightly. You will learn to choose as we have today. Take joy in they who will live through your work. Sorrow not over those who deserve death. And they bleed red, like these beasts today, or they run black with ichor, know that any who would harm our land are monsters, and go to the fight full with the knowledge that you are Bryoni, and you will protect her."
He had touched the cold flesh of the dead, and it had been cold horror to know just how many had died at the hands of Bryoni, stirred by their songs, his own three words of power sung again and again, over and over, until Maman said it was finish, her own complex and wild, and paired with the mad Mistlander spelldances and the bittersweet smells of her herbs. But it was not the first time their songs would be needed, and it was not the last that she showed him their harvest.
He was not indifferent, but he was not afraid to kill for their land. Wild and harsh she might be, but Bryoni was part of them, as they were part of the land. Each dedicated by blood at birthing. Each consecrated to her soils at death, or pledged to the wild sea. He would not fear, for there was naught TO fear, not for a true son.
Yet still, with the anticipation aquiver in his gut, young Gareth offered up the old words with the gesture, to call upon them all the blessings of Sea, of Sky, of Earth.
And then, the laughter of the others, their inane talk, it was all ended as the men called for the youths to make ready, for they would ride. The Northern raiders had more than earned what would come. This was not really a game, no matter how his Twelve looked on it, but he would ride in their excitement instead of in the great anger that might have risen to think of their crimes. It was a bold move, indeed. They had taken a small fishing village, and made it their own for a winter home. They killed the youths and what women remained were they who hadn't the strength to fight, and their daughters. It was not worth speaking, what such men would do to the daughters of Bryoni.
It was a righteous blood for the Prince to claim as his first, or so the King had spoken.
King Gareth was nothing like the little son named for him. He towered, a figure straight from legend. He led the others, seven foot six and broad shouldered, his golden hair rich as a mane, his gray eyes hard as the sea-stones that Gareth the Younger had called upon before to bash the bottoms out of enemy ships. He had no song in him of power, like the Prince and Princess, like his bold fairy wife, but he had the kind of fierce strength that men respected. And he led in such battles, though he might have grown fat in keep and sent out others. His wolves ghosted after his great horse, even as the Prince's own young wolf and halfblood hounds would follow his Twelve. They attended better than men, the beasts, and swelled the untried young warrior's personal command to twenty and four.
Twelve boys, one half grown winter wolf, eleven fine hounds between them.
They rode out into the crisp, cold day, the light flashing on armor, on tokens braided into the heavy hair of the battle-tested, on spear and axe and sword. Their breath turned steam, and the frosted grasses broke crisply beneath many hooves.
It was almost a disaster. They had ranged themselves, the woods to their left, the fields to their right, the sea below the cliffs on which Hylainn had stood. Father had risen the great horn to call the charge, that their enemy know his doom came, when one of the wolves broke away and set up a howl towards the forest, and some of the men wheeled their horses, and the forces were divided as there came from the woods a great gout of flame.
As the King called his own ranks, young Gareth shouted to his own lads. "MAGOS! Ildr! Ready to counter! This is our own, lads! Damon! Oisinn! Ready to left, Eamonn, Comcha, Art! To RIGHT! You rest, form behind, ready!"
His voice was sweet and high, girlish and young. Yet it carried as well as the men with their great booming calls, and though Damon had looked half ready to bolt, for rare were such battles with one who knew the Songs, and Art had been bewildered as the older men broke into what felt like utter chaos, they latched onto it, whirled into position.
The thistledown haired Prince swept his hands through the air, and while greater men were forced to retreat back, his own little company found themselves feeling the chill of the world clasp them like babe in mother's arms. He guided the shields as Ildranach canted the same three precious syllables he had sung beside his mother as a little lad, keeping his horse steady, then snapped the patterns tight and gave a cry for them to charge.
The gelid air glistened before them. The mad group of boys who broke away from those avoiding strikes, led by a tiny, girlish thing, got the calls of startled grown men behind them. But THIS, they had practiced, and in the teeth of fear, the elder laughed, even as the younger followed the Prince's lead out of instilled habit even as they charged the tree line. Those who would have cut them off found themselves under attack from the village, while a much smaller force was kept back to protect the spellsinger. Gareth half stood in the stirrups, his spear still through its straps across his shoulders, his light sword at his hip. He called signal to Ildranach, who shifted his cant and rose similarly, and they who handled the hounds called commands.
Screams and the fierce baying and howling of the half wolves filled the frosty woods as the two spellsong-trained boys kept their focus forward. "Bows ready. Tight spread. Paired! Damon! Eamonn! Attend left and right! Oisin! Comcha! Attend bow! Art, spear readied! And by the THREE, watch your HEAD!"
There was an oily concussion of fire, heat that sought to suck the warmth from the very air, greasy as it was caught in the defensive weaves and wicked away. His horse did not start, though Ildr had to speak the calming rune to his own. He anticipated his lads could handle their own.
They were TRAINED for this, his Twelve. His very special twelve, for the half-Mistlander prince who could sing spells like a magos, but must know the blade and battle to ever have a place in the trials.
Bowstrings twanged. Gareth sighted at last the slim figure of the magos, calling to him defenders even as he slid into pattern for a greater spell, hardly expecting Bryoni to shrug off fire like it was nothing.
"KYAAH! GWYDDA! K'shku!" he called out, before giving a lift of hand to Ildr and pulling his horse short, swinging down from the saddle. He had seen older men swing out of the saddle and roll with the momentum, barreling forward like mad, but he was far too little to do so yet. Ildr caught the threads of their fading shields and tensed for the signal, as slim Gareth called forth his challenge.
"PAH! Summerland dog!" The pale child pulled his spear loose from its moorings, gave it a practiced spin and shift with step, with flick of hand to make his little voice boom through the trees, even as the rest ranged themselves. The Twelve had brought with them others, if not so well protected, for when fathers saw sons going in a headlong rush towards the source of the fire, some had panicked and redirected their own. But they spread out through the trees, as the little Prince stepped forward. "Child! Your guardians are dead! Surrender, or try the mercy of Bryoni's son!"
The mage's fire splashed uselessly once more. Gareth pretended, and pretended beautifully, that the shields could take far more than one hit more before they were spent, striding forward, little shoulders back. He was a bright shape in the dark woods, bold in his golden-white lindorm-hide armor cut to spin and shift with the wild turns of Mistland spelldance and the quicker style he had adopted on the practice field. Men cried out as the dogs, the arrows, found their marks. The little prince called forth his challenge once more.
"Southern dog! Sandworm or snake you be, come forth and meet the mercy of Bryoni's son, or my wolves shall have your heart!"
The raiders knew the madness of Bryoni, and the remaining four guardians called, "He is yours!" to the little girlish boy with his great spear and his mad twilight eyes, and as the battle raged on behind, out in the fields, the dogs were called to mercy and two of the four shoved out their rune-painted mage, looking to this absurd child expectantly.
"I call right!" Gareth informed them, and those behind formed about, while the raiders laughed.
"Haakim, your skin, you may keep yet," one spoke to the magos, a wiry man with skin withered from some long ago accident with some nephew of the fire he wielded and confounded dark eyes. "You to fight some little girl! For honor, ke?"
"Await your mercy, I call right. Ready yourself, and if you break form, sandworm, your blood is my price! Prove yourself before Bryoni's mercy, at the hand of the King's own son!" Gareth called, and the mage looked to the still, cool faces of the little boys around him, the few men who had lingered, the bloody-mawed dogs returned to handlers' sides, then spat and rose.
"You truly are mad, little girl," the mage growled. "Whatever your tricks."
Gareth straightened, his narrow shoulders stiffening. "Magery or blade, sandworm." He would not let himself fall into protesting the man's mockery. "Choose your death."
"A little girl means to best Haakim of the Flame? Whatever your mother's gift, dear one, do not think I fear to mark your pretty face. This mercy. You fall, and we are free, yes? To go unmolested by your little boys?"
There were shifts and creaks of motions for weapons. Pale eyes narrowed at this whorish son of the sands who had hired his power to such scum as the raiders, who dared to insult their prince.
"I fall, and you are free. You fall, and your men are my prisoners, to face the King's Justice." A kinder fate, sometimes, than being torn limb from limb by wolves and rent by the boys' spears and blades? Either clean death or penalties. Bryoni did not torture, for clean death was sweetest, they said, to the wakeful land.
"Very well, pretty one. I call power."
Little Gareth sunk his spear into the earth. "Bryoni, bear witness," he spoke, then slid into expectant, readied position. His wolf fell back to stand by Eamonn, her muzzle red with gore. There was an expectant hush throughout the ring. It was madness.
It really was. A boy of eleven, challenging a mercenary A'skani mage who hired himself to brigands. Yet the men among the boys watched it with the same solemnity as the rest, for here was the blood of Kings, and this was a kind of justice as ancient as Bryoni herself.
Haakim gave a short laugh, then bowed to the boy before moving to slide into the motions of spell. He had once been grander than a sellsword, and knew formal dueling. It was more surprising that this child actually looked like he knew what he was doing. Gareth held his ground, as the man began his gestures, then whipped out with the swiftness only so very young a boy could muster, his twilight eyes following the man's motions as he rewove the last of his own protections. With whirl and shift and hard syllable, the mercenary called forth a focused burst of flame. The air grew terribly dry in the wake of it, and it seemed that it would overpower the Prince's altered shield, gathering, burning, building the air to a strange breeze that stank of ozone and scorched the grasses around the arc of it.
At the last moment, Gareth spoke a hard syllable, pivoted a quarter turn, and caught the air with hands, twisting, thrusting forward. There was a concussion of mad sound, a brilliant flare that blinded all, a great and terrible roar of winds frigid and liquid hot blending, and a scream.
"Garth!" Eamonn cried out as spots danced before his eyes. There was cursing in the burbling tongue of the son of the sands, and there was something purer, sweeter, as the air grew gelid again, heavy with strange anticipation. A defiant cry filled the air, and there was, amid the strange dust and madness of the rest, the sight of slim Gareth the Younger throwing forth spikes of ice. The half-wolf hounds grew excitable, while his Gwydda simply watched with an almost human patience. The mercenary had been scrambling to rise from against a shattered-limbed tree, the smells of blood and sap mingling with dust, only to cry out as he was pierced by the darts. The very earth seemed to shift a little below Haakim, a sickly pitch as the youth snapped down and twisted through another complex set.
Haakim's companions cried out in fear. There were many tales of Bryoni's Witch-Queen, but who were they to truly comprehend that her blood stirred in this pretty boy with the fierce twilight eyes and floating hair?
There were no cheers, though the boys grew more excited at the sight of blood wetting the mage's dark clothes. It was unnatural, to the A'skani man, how these boys watched like the wolf-dogs they attended, eager to see him ended. Full with terror, at last realizing that whatever this child was, it was NOT weak, there was a desperate scramble, a catch at something in his robes, a quick gesture interrupted by another powerful, concussive strike of wind that knocked him hard against the tree. A small pouch dropped, its powder scattering over the scorched pine needles. There was a final snap and step and heavy tone, and the earth itself caught his hands, his feet.
The boy strode over to stand above him. Tiny and girlish, expressionless. Should not any earthly thing either be full with anger or joy at such outpouring of power? Should not any face, small or large, be painted with any emotion at all in the midst of madness?
"Bryoni has made her choice, Haakim." His sweet voice was calm and even, but pitched to carry. "Ask the King's mercy, and it is yours. Otherwise, you belong to the land."
His companions had fallen to their knees, wide eyed. Haakim struggled against the bonds, then spat. "Release me, CHILD."
"As you would," the boy replied in his lightly accented Trader's tongue. He bore no expression, still, as he drew the littler blade at his waist. Haakim's eyes widened more, and he began to cry out a malediction, only to be cut off by a weighted strike deep into his throat. The boy wrenched the blade through, wrenched it free.
Haakim did not die well. He struggled and gurgled, his eyes starkly wide, choked and foamed. The Prince wiped his blade, eyes fierce, expression flat, as he spoke to his companions, "Bind our prisoner's hands and remove their weapons. Ready to return to the field. Our work is hardly done here."
Only one of the four could even think to try to struggle, and he was felled efficiently, neatly. The boy did not turn away from his prey until the A'skani mage's eyes went blank and his writhing ended. He gestured, spoke flat syllable, and the earthen shackles fell from his bloodied wrists. He sheathed his sword, pulled his spear from the earth, and gave a whistle for his horse. He could feel his hands trembling a little as he mounted, but he prayed it did not show.
It must not show, for as he told his Twelve, the battle was not DONE. Three dogs, four boys, these were devoted to keeping their three prisoners in line, as the rest formed rank and burst out to find the men either falling to mercy or retreating, the head of one with mad blue patterns all up his cheeks skewered on the end of the King's sword. Some of the Twelve's arrows, javelins, these found their way into the cowards who would not try for the King's mercy. Gareth the Younger found himself swept off his horse as the last prisoners were secured and presented to his father by Dubhain and Oisin the Elder, proud as though he were their own son in telling the King what battle the young Prince had won.
"Aye, m'lord, y'ought 'ave seen 'em! Called out that misbegotten son of a dog like a MAN!"
"Nary so much as a flinch!"
Gareth the Younger knelt before the King. "The Twelve served well, Father. They rode boldly and struck well for Bryoni. Nary once did they break formation." He then dared to look up. "I am sorry I broke away. Can you forgive me?"
The last was fairly soft, his curious eyes uneasy. Father's stony ones peered down at him intently. At last, the man gave a short laugh and caught up his son. Exuberant. "That's my lad! A commander," he told the boy, "knows his men, and knows his limits. A GOOD commander knows to handle diversion for the main force. Come, Garth!" This, as he released the boy. "Come, all! See what sons we have! The magos' head shall pretty the coast with the raider's!
Then, Gareth the Younger smiled at King Gareth's praise, and as he saw his father, bloodied from battle but exuberant, he knew pride. At his mother's side, he had known necessity, power, force.
Here, sword first bloodied, the little cold lump of killing fading away, melting with adrenaline, he knew pride.
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